10年5至7月間，跟一群就要升小一的孩子寫詩，一如概往，我的得著，一定不比他們小。跟這機構的幼兒園做了「當堂故事」多年（就是聽孩子邊創作邊講邊演出故事，再筆錄），發現孩子面對世界的揮洒自如，當是寫詩的高手，又難得對方信任，就上馬了。跟講古不同，我把孩子的口語寫成書面語，意思後述。
2010年9月26日星期日
2010年9月7日星期二
The gypsy travels
The gypsy travels
The black earth
That talks of
Dawns
When the first bird
Hurls itself through the
Half-darkness
There’s another world
Parallel
To theirs just
On the other side of the road
So close
They can smell
Each other’s morning
2010.8.10
The black earth
That talks of
Dawns
When the first bird
Hurls itself through the
Half-darkness
There’s another world
Parallel
To theirs just
On the other side of the road
So close
They can smell
Each other’s morning
2010.8.10
After the KJ Concert
The universe is
A bit bigger than the head
Of a twenty-year-old. A world
Spinning, spinning
In his music which is
A bit inaccessible
To the calculating universe. Another world
Spinning, spinning
6 june 2010
A bit bigger than the head
Of a twenty-year-old. A world
Spinning, spinning
In his music which is
A bit inaccessible
To the calculating universe. Another world
Spinning, spinning
6 june 2010
2009年12月30日星期三
Imagine a beginning
Imagine a beginning
that does not exist
But imagine
the day of more than 24 hours
There was no hours
in the beginning
there was time and like there is
Time, people sit together
to imagine the wholeness of earth
and our footsteps rhyming
Breath, imagine
The divine hand
unveiling the scroll of
plain vegetation, the cradle of
Survival, imagine peace
That does not exist but
Imagine
The clenching fist, holding
A grain, decent and gigantic
Imagine hope
that does not exist, but
Imagine
a beginning
Uncle Hung
24 December, 2009
2009年12月23日星期三
The bottles
---After enjoying the jam session at Visage
The bottles rise
salute to the music
Midnight beyond midnight
the musicians live
The wine flows, the beer
and hard liquors too
The bottles salute
the music lives
Outside, empty streets are on guard
the empty sky too
They salute the tumbling bottles and
make sure they arrive home safe
Now when daybreak is here
The bottles are in all kinds of shape
But the music lives
to salute the musicians on their way to sleep
Uncle Hung
23 Sept 09
The bottles rise
salute to the music
Midnight beyond midnight
the musicians live
The wine flows, the beer
and hard liquors too
The bottles salute
the music lives
Outside, empty streets are on guard
the empty sky too
They salute the tumbling bottles and
make sure they arrive home safe
Now when daybreak is here
The bottles are in all kinds of shape
But the music lives
to salute the musicians on their way to sleep
Uncle Hung
23 Sept 09
2009年12月7日星期一
寫一首歌在牆的靜默上
我們一定要
以不同的語言跟上帝說話
滿佈鏡子的通道
盲目的井流出的水
放下繩索直落天堂
寫一首歌
在牆的靜默上
漣漪迴盪
至天明
帶著韻律的凝視
以不同的語言跟上帝說話
滿佈鏡子的通道
盲目的井流出的水
放下繩索直落天堂
寫一首歌
在牆的靜默上
漣漪迴盪
至天明
帶著韻律的凝視
蛛網的純淨
回歸家園
3 feb. 09
回歸家園
3 feb. 09
2009年12月6日星期日
2006年12月17日星期日
我在媽媽的肚子裏跳舞
我在媽媽的肚子裏跳舞
媽媽在陽光裏跳舞
陽光在指頭和髮絲間跳舞
指頭和髮絲在風裏跳舞
風在自行車的鈴聲中跳舞
自行車的鈴聲在迂迴的路上跳舞
迂迴的路在黃昏的旗幟中跳舞………..
雄仔叔叔看了卓璇的畫就想起這些……
媽媽在陽光裏跳舞
陽光在指頭和髮絲間跳舞
指頭和髮絲在風裏跳舞
風在自行車的鈴聲中跳舞
自行車的鈴聲在迂迴的路上跳舞
迂迴的路在黃昏的旗幟中跳舞………..
雄仔叔叔看了卓璇的畫就想起這些……
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